Elevator Pitch No. 4

Reflection and changes on feedback:

            I received some pretty honest and valuable feedback. Some of my audience liked the elevator music touch in the background of my video, and others found it distracting. I could see that it could be a bit distracting. My audience also told me that my product seems a bit complicated, and that I should use terms that everyone can understand. Overall, I was given compliments on an enjoyable video. There are many things that I changed to this one. I was more dynamic by moving around a lot. I eliminated the elevator music. I thought that touch was fun, but I may have gone overboard. I transformed the pitch into an “imagination” concept. This will help my audience have a quick understanding of some elements my smart device can do. Therefore, I tried to make it less complex. I wanted to add a heart beat in this one while I was jogging, but I was afraid it was going to be too much. Maybe I should have added it for a couple seconds. That would have been fun.